Yes it would have been better. I did not understand this story at all. It was not in order and it didn’t really make since to me. I know the story had a dog and it talked about a moon and the narrator. This story really annoyed me and made me very angry. I would not ever read this story again because after my second time reading it I still don’t understand it.
I relate to your post because I feel the same way.
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