This seemed very short, and it was very weird in the way you typed it. I like it though, and your pink backround for you Blog!
Theres a lot of errors on your essay, you need to go back and make corrections!
I like your story but you change the topic and it throw off the reader and makes them not want to read the story no more but, other than that it's a good story
Umm your story is sad and why do you have the rubric at the end?
This seemed very short, and it was very weird in the way you typed it. I like it though, and your pink backround for you Blog!
ReplyDeleteTheres a lot of errors on your essay, you need to go back and make corrections!
ReplyDeleteI like your story but you change the topic and it throw off the reader and makes them not want to read the story no more but, other than that it's a good story
ReplyDeleteUmm your story is sad and why do you have the rubric at the end?
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